Matt Bellamy

I barely even know what Supernatural is but this made me laugh: in no way am I trying to take credit for her original song, because seriously, who would do ...

As others have said, this needs to be broken up into lines, like Sassykat has done above. Though I think if you do that, the line "and lots of lies" ...

I like this. The only nit-pick I have is that I think "wrack" should be "wreck", but then it wouldn't really rhyme. And I think you did a really good ...

Hi! I like this, and I love the idea of someone else's tears on your face as if part of them lives on in you. That's great. But I think ...

I like this. But I think it's just the beginning. I like it so much that I want to know more. Why does she do what she does, who is ...

Hi! This poem definitely has potential but I think there are a few ways you can make it better. Firstly, I think you mean "wander" rather than "wonder" in the ...

Hi! I wasn't sure about the repetition at first but after reading this for a second time, I think it sounds okay. The only repetition I don't like is where ...

I like the emotion you put into this, it's very descriptive and paints a good picture. I think if the lines were a bit shorter it would flow a bit ...

This is a real epic of a poem! What struck me was that you stuck to your rhyming scheme without anything sounding predictable or forced, but while still being very ...

Hi! I think you've had a great idea for a poem and it's sad and well expressed. But you seem to be a prisoner to your rhyming scheme. Remember, you ...

Hi! I can completely relate to this poem and I think that's why I really like it. It's short and sweet and it flows and rhymes really well, so no ...

You could totally turn this into a haiku - it has seventeen syllables! Like this: Today I glanced at a tangerine. It was green. The tangerine screamed. Of course, it's ...

Hey! I like how mysterious this poem is, and you know what I think would be great? A second poem - like, a separate poem altogether, like a sequel, that ...

Hi! I like your idea for this poem but I think it's a little difficult to follow. If you could separate the two voices more clearly, I think that would ...

The title of this poem drew me to it, and I was not disappointed! I love how sort of humorous this is, though still with a touch of sincerity, and ...